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Alrighty. I hope this is the final product of Collie. Her appearance really needs to stop changing @.@ Well I need to stop being picky. Basically his is what she looks like. The lower half is very insignificant, I didn't feel like drawing it. Her hair is now normal-ish. I couldn't stop listening to Labels or Love by Fergie while making this, lol.

Yes, Colli'es favoirte colors are gold and yellow. She sports a see-through black "jacket", a purple tank top underneath and skinny jeans, as well as yellow / gold eyeshadow, star-shaped earrings, and an eyebrow piercing. Oh and as usual, she has no bewb, is too skinny, and has a huge tail.

Collie Richards (c) *ShuffleStar

Critiques


:iconktisiroppoix10:
Pros:
:bulletblue: I like the shading a lot on the clothes.
:bulletblue:The color scheme is good.
:bulletpurple:Using complimentary colors of yellow and purple was a good idea to create the figure as the main focal point.
:bulletblue: She's a very pretty character.
:bulletblue: I like the text incorporated behind her as an echo of her name.

Con:
:bulletgreen:The only thing I would say is the hair. Basic shadows are there, but there aren't any highlights.

Tips:
Hair tends to glisten in light, mostly where the hair curves the most. So in this case probably right near the ears and the curve near the end of the hair. (Hair is probably one of the hardest things for anyone to do, I still have issues with it) These are just some tips I have picked up over time.

I hope this helped. I like it quite a bit.
It also shows quite a bit of improvement throughout your gallery, which is always a good thing to see. Well done!
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i must say this is truly another awsome peice of work you've done up
the lines and colors are well done up, i like how u blended light and dark colors together, esp the way the eyes are done up truly amazing :)
the only thing i would suggest would prob be the pose, i would say try somthing a lil more diff you know spice it up a lil bit, try a pose that is out of your norm :)
no way is that tryin to step on anyones toes or offend, just an oppinion :P
anyway love the char dev and the way it was done up, deff thumbs up :D
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I think I liked her fur coat better. It fits in with her rich bastard personality.

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Oh true. lol I'll just add in one day she wears a fur coat made of illegal weasel fur, lol

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The ratio of swordsmen to penguins is too high! We only have 1 penguin for every 10 swordsmen!
:iconnukathefox:
I love Collie... a lot. For soem weird reason. lol. xDDD;

I think she looks cool, you gave her a really neat outfit! 8D :+fav:

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:iconfleshandstone:
Nice. Like the pose and the colors. The only thing I'd suggest is making your interior lines a little more bold, with differing widths.

That would make her face and clothing really pop out.
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Thanks so much for the advice! It really will help next time I draw c:

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The ratio of swordsmen to penguins is too high! We only have 1 penguin for every 10 swordsmen!
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Thank yew!

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The ratio of swordsmen to penguins is too high! We only have 1 penguin for every 10 swordsmen!
:iconautumnlubbsthelulz:
This is great! I love it ^^

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Seems like you improved on her quite a bit. :)

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i like the eyes, the pose and the actitud x3, nice character as usual.

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